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[docs] Updated quick-start docs for gsoc25 features #347
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Right now, the update of the upgrade information is not asynchronous yet, | ||
so you will have to reload the page periodically to find new information. | ||
This will be addressed in a future release. | ||
The firmware upgrade process now features a realtime progress bar that |
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I would try to communicate this with less words and connect it to the previous sentence, eg:
then a new tab "<NAME OF TAB HERE>" will appear in the device page which allows us to
observe in real time what's going on during the upgrade without requiring page reloads.
<SCREENSHOT OR GIF FOCUSED ON THIS ASPECT HERE>
Adding another dedicated screenshot should help to give more visibility to this great work you've done.
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Right now, the update of the upgrade information is not asynchronous yet, | ||
so you will have to reload the page periodically to find new information. | ||
This will be addressed in a future release. | ||
The mass upgrade operation now features a realtime progress bar that |
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I would try to communicate this with less words and connect it to the previous sentence, eg:
you will be redirected to a page in which you can monitor the progress of the upgrade operations
in real time.
<SCREENSHOT OR GIF FOCUSED ON THIS ASPECT HERE>
Adding another dedicated screenshot should help to give more visibility to this great work you've done.
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Here we need to change the path of 2 existing gifs to point to docs/images/26/[etc]
as explained here:
#348 (review)
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Closes #346