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Several different legal frameworks have been proposed or enacted by jurisdictions around the world to address this concern. Some models rely upon user consent for tracking. Other - models based on the principle of data minimization simply prohibit certain data sharing or + models based on the principle of data minimization simply prohibit certain data sharing or data processing entirely.
Some laws and proposals grant users the right to request that their privacy be protected, including "opt out" requests that their data not be sold or shared beyond the business with which they intend to interact. Requiring that people manually express their - rights for each and every site they visit is, however, impractical, and an imposition of + rights for each and every site they visit is, however, impractical, and an imposition of "privacy labor" on people ([[?privacy-principles]]).
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The specification should not be interpreted as an endorsement of the opt-out model of @@ -401,7 +401,7 @@
Exposing a user's preference (in the HTTP header field or {{Window/navigator}} object) potentially divides users into two groups in a way that might increase the information - available for browser or device fingerprinting. This additional information is available - unless the signal perfectly correlates with other signals or is turned on in a - non-configurable setting. Thus, depending on the implementation, the GPC signal may impose - a privacy cost, though, one intended to be justified by the privacy benefit of sending the + available for browser or device fingerprinting. This additional information is available + unless the signal perfectly correlates with other signals or is turned on in a + non-configurable setting. Thus, depending on the implementation, the GPC signal may impose + a privacy cost, though, one intended to be justified by the privacy benefit of sending the signal.