Address SA feedback

Author: mcmorisi

source/monitoring.txt

@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@ the Java Platform.
 .. tip:: Consult the Official JMX and JConsole Documentation
 
    The descriptions of JMX and JConsole in this example are illustrative
-   rather than a source of truth. For guaranteed up to date information, consult
+   rather than a source of truth. For guaranteed up-to-date information, consult
    the following official Oracle resources:
 
    - `JConsole documentation <https://www.oracle.com/technical-resources/articles/java/jconsole.html>`__
@@ -362,15 +362,15 @@ terminal:
 Once JConsole is open, perform the following actions in the GUI:
 
 #. Select the Java process running the preceding example code.
-#. Press :guilabel:`Insecure Connection` in the warning dialog box.
+#. Click :guilabel:`Insecure Connection` in the warning dialog box.
 #. Click on the :guilabel:`MBeans` tab.
 #. Inspect your connection pool events under the ``"org.mongodb.driver"`` domain.
 
-When you no longer want to inspect your connection pools in JConsole, do the
-following:
+When you no longer want to inspect your connection pools in JConsole, perform the
+following tasks:
 
-- Exit JConsole by closing the JConsole window
-- Stop the Java program running the preceding code snippet
+#. Exit JConsole by closing the JConsole window.
+#. Stop the Java program running the preceding code snippet.
 
 For more information about JMX and JConsole, see the following resources from
 Oracle: