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chore: clean up wording in README and web pages (#20)
* Rewrite README text * Clean up main page text * Clean up about page text
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README.md

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## Installation
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For running locally this docs. You have to execute
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To run the docs locally, you have to execute
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```bash
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yarn
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```
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followed by
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```bash
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yarn develop
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## Build
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For building the docs into the `public` dir, just run:
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To build the docs in the `public` dir, just run:
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```bash
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yarn build
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## Playground (temporaly disabled)
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## Playground (temporarily disabled)
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If you want to have the playground running too, just execute
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If you also want to have the playground running, just execute
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./playground/graphene-js/build.sh
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## Automation
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Each time we modify the docs in the `master` branch Netlify job runs and updates the website, so [Graphene's website](https://graphene-python.org) have always the latest layout.
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Each time we modify the docs in the `master` branch a Netlify job runs and updates the website, so [Graphene's website](https://graphene-python.org) always has the latest layout.

src/pages/index.js

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<h1>Simple yet Powerful</h1>
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Graphene-Python is a library for building GraphQL APIs in Python
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easily, its main goal is to provide a simple but extendable API for
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making developers' lives easier.
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easily, its main goal is to provide a simple but extendable API to
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make developers' lives easier.
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</p>
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But, what is GraphQL? GraphQL is a data query language developed
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Graphene-Python will work out of the box with your current stack.
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For being able to have a fast development process, is essential to
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reuse as much code as possible.
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It is essential to ruse as much code as possible to enable a fast development process/
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We offer integrations with different frameworks that will get you up
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to speed in the blink of an eye.
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This integrations include:
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These integrations include:
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<b>Django</b>:{" "}
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Graphene is trusted by thousands of individual developers and
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companies everyday. Here are just a few of the organizations that
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choose Graphene to use GraphQL in their stacks.
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choose Graphene to integrate GraphQL in their stacks.
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<div className="logos">
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<YelpLogo />

src/pages/team.js

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<h1>Meet the Team</h1>
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The development of Graphene and its ecosystem is guided by an
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international team, some of whom have chosen to be featured below.
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international team of contributors, some of whom have chosen to be featured below.
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{members.map(member => <Member key={member.name} {...member} />)}
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