Update graphs.md

Author: djeada

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@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ Some real-world examples include:
 - Social networks (people connected through friendships, family ties, or professional relationships)
 - Countries and their political alliances (diplomatic ties, trade partnerships, or defense pacts between nations)
 
-Viewing these systems as graphs allows for deeper analysis, better optimization, and more accurate predictions of their behavior. In computer science and mathematics, graphs serve as a powerful data structure that provides the tools needed for this kind of modeling.
+Viewing these systems as graphs lets us dig deeper into how they work, optimize them better, and even predict their behavior more accurately. In fields like computer science and math, graphs are a powerful tool that helps us model and understand these systems effectively.
 
 ### Graph Terminology